Liuhuan , one of the most popular singers in China ,was born in Tianjin on August 26^th, 1963.
He is able to sing songs of different styles, ranging from popular music to rock music and from Chinese folk songs to foreign songs. He is not only a singer but also a composer.
He has achieved great success in music. He sang and composed hundreds of songs, most of which are very popular all over the country. So he was honored many titles. He was also invite to write and sing songs for international sports meetings ,including the 29 Olympic Games in 2008.
Liuhuan is a man of various abilities. Besides the talent in music, he is also interested in many other things such as tourism and arts.

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