Hello, everyone! 
I’m from a big school in the city of Qingdao, China. At present I am 17 years old. As a high school student, I’m eager to make friends with some teenagers from Great Britain.
English is one of the biggest subjects in my school. So I do hope to have more friends who are native English speakers. By communicating with you, I hope to learn more about English culture. Meanwhile, we can know more about each other’s school life and learning experiences. Still, I hope to have a chance to chat with you online or over e-mail if possible.
It doesn’t matter whether you’re a male or female. Please leave a message on the Internet for me if you want to be my friend. Many thanks. My e-mail is lihuachina@ 163.com

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。